Friday, April 13, 2012

The Phantom Rose Comments

Rating: 4.0

A romantic walk in central park
on a autumn evening with leaves of brown
swaying under the crescent moon's spark
feeling blissful and acting like a clown
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Adam Lally
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Yusuf Qomor Olusola 18 January 2018

The competent and sweet aroma of this poem reside in the powerful use of sight imagery. The diction also contributed greatly! ! Really like it!

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