The Phantasm Comments

The best example of alluding lines of corruption. This visual poem has the title as the first line. Concrete words and words showing movement make it a good visual poem. An honest man/woman reaches the higher post but gets shocked to see the most grafty criminals lingering there. He comes off and laughs at the unsatiating looting of the corrupt men. A gentle satire to read and enjoy.Rated *****

Very nice poem.Usage of imagery is fantastic.

what a great metaphoric poem.

people struggle very hard to come up in life, what ever field that they are in. Keeping that status is not an easy task and they may try to prove their point either by boasting about themselves or spoiling the caliber of others! a thought provoking poem!