Tuesday, February 21, 2006

The Petition (Revision) Comments

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The Petition
The political guy accosted me
at the entrance to the BART.
'Are you a registered California voter? '
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Max Reif 21 February 2006

Tai Chi Italy also had a comment on the earlier version of this, but I lost it. It made her laugh, was her main point.

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Gina Onyemaechi 21 February 2006

Well, you caught him out good and proper, speaker (is the 'I' you, Maxy?) . Good on you! Have a 10 for your sharpness, monsieur Reif. Smiling at you, Gina.

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