Friday, May 16, 2008

The Persuasion Of A Child Comments

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Young children are architects with high hopes
Their soulful eyes and the word 'Please...'
Create persuasion; like honey from the bees.
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Ben Gieske 20 July 2009

Truly charming. Architect is the right word to describe children's activities. On Saturday my wife and I had a downtown tour of Nashville. Amazing all the old churches and buildings as well as the new ones. Some of them were very large and impressive with their architectural design and details. This added a lot to the meaning of this poem. Their is no limit to what children can imagine and we cannot imagine what they will later create.

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Abha Sharma 17 May 2008

The childish innocence is seductive When their eyes say please… Who can refuse their innocent pleads Which always make us please…. Lines reflecting the loving gesture towards these naughty but innocent children…. Abha

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Thad Wilk 16 May 2008

Yes Theresa, children have a special gift, of persuasion, you are sooo right! They do make it hard for you to say no! *10* Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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