Monday, May 30, 2005

The Perfumed Donkey Comments

Rating: 5.0

A donkey stood inside his box,
and, looking down saw four white socks.
As just that day the donkey's teacher
had said that socks ain't donkey features.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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H.x You take me all over the place as usual.... love your creative mind and wonder where you really go to make this donkey and your other menagerie of animals dance so humourously across this page... well done on a poem that is not only clever craft but makes the reader laugh 'my socks off' over every situation encountered till the last line.. I also am too scared to ask if this is the same donkey that also fell down the hole and finally climbed his way out.... aroha Dxx

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Tara Sneed 25 April 2006

I have to admit, this is one funny poem. I love the donkey theme. Bravo on a work well written.

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Gina Onyemaechi 27 March 2006

That's some imagination you've got there, Herbs! Ha ha ha! A great giggle. G.

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Mary Nagy 30 May 2005

My favorite of your postings today! ! Very cute. My daughter loves donkeys so she'll love this poem! I like your lighthearted poems very much! Sincerely, Mary

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