Friday, February 29, 2008

The Perfume Factory Comments

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The poor sooty chimney cleaner who shouts from a top;
' Oh! These trampled flowers cry irksomely
But the inhuman machines never stop the rotation
And crush the soft petals vigorously.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 29 February 2008

I think that Sandra said it best, , but I will just add how thankful that I am that you have written so skillfully this excellent poem for me Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 29 February 2008

The lament of the human spirit against forces over which he has no control. Excellent write, Nimal. May your voice continue to be heard. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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