Thursday, January 21, 2016

The Perfume... Comments

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The perfume...

Once upon a time is how many stories begin..
This time I thought how bout a poem telling a story within..
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Rishi Thakkar
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Mithilesh Yadav 30 January 2016

It was from my own handkerchief Oh what an irony.. It was the same reason the girl came to greet.. She was a stranger to me but again the smell of perfume was even what made it her fantacy.. Well penned........ Funny on a serious note.... Grrt

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Kavya . 28 January 2016

a v nice story...was it the perfume of the attractive lady that attracted you the most, but most of it, your day ended on a happy note. Good work!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 21 January 2016

Wow....a beautiful, sweet and lovely story in the form of poem....beautifully narrated...loved the story...thank u for sharing :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2016

Little something which attracts my mind's thinking...is definitely very interesting and amazing. Marvelous poem shared on. Wise drafting.10

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Rishi Thakkar 21 January 2016

Thank u sir..hope u enjoyed the anti climax

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