Thursday, August 6, 2009

The Perfectionist's Life Story! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waking up in my cradle seeing my mother beautiful eyes
Telling me I was her blessing, her newborn child
Saying I was too good to be true so….perfect
Remembering that from walking on my two feet
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Alex Gomez 11 August 2009

An amazing introductory poem to a poet's life story. Though you claim your work must be 'flawless, ' I can spot a few flaws myself. Lol. Keep up the good work, though.

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C. P. Sharma 11 August 2009

CJ, Just beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But I would say, Flight of fancy can be the food of soul, But sweating hard fills the body's bowl. CP

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**aShLeY~NiiChOl<3** 1013 06 August 2009

WOW! ! ! Thats really all I can say! ! ! !

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