The Perfect Word Comments

You Utter; ' I have attempted a spiritual bargain. I have called upon God and sold him my world so that I might invent you, the perfect word.' I reflect; Metaphores are Immortal and used with likened, yet indepth poetic expression. God Is not He God is not She God is We -Buddhist 'All things that have 'Self' are Godly' -Swami, Sachdenanda,1960 God, Un-definable term, by any other name be called; 'LOVE' in Peace -louie levy

beautifully written. i wouldnt be surprised if you become a legend and join the famous of our lot, Poe, Frost. you are following in the permanent foot steps. keep it up!

Nice romantic write...........................

Fantastic! ! ! ! the words in this poem are perfect in denoting the message you presented. A master piece-in my opinion. The perfect words just flow down the page.

I like this one. Alot! Great job. =)

i really do like this poem, all of it. you write fantastically <3 10

awesome poem. just awesome..............my one word is hope.......though i did not invent.