Saturday, November 12, 2011

The Perfect Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The breeze blows,
Soft and soothing as a caress.
The breeze blows,
Taking with it all the stress.
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Isabella Francis
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Kee Thampi 20 December 2011

hug comes and shields her, Giving her all the warmth she needs. A hug comes and shields her, In the arms of her beloved she peacefully sleeps. very good to forsaken shields

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isabella Francis 13 November 2011

Thank you so much.. I'm so encouraged to write more.. Thank you..

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Romeo Della Valle 12 November 2011

Beautiful and very smooth, it gives me sensation of peace! Rich in imagery and fine texture, definitely, a 10+++ Your poetic talent Isabella is so obvious through this amazing poem! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City..

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Abhishek Tiwari 12 November 2011

Definetly a hug can be compared with all the austonishing natures 'plays'.. It is magical.. Thats y v cl it zadu ki jhappi! Again a great output of you heartly feelings!

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Sam Varghis 12 November 2011

Beautiful. I voted 9'. Regards Sam

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Ebi Robert 12 November 2011

Believe me, this flows................................

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