Thursday, July 5, 2012

The Perfect Moment Comments

Rating: 3.2

On a crossroad
by the shimmering light
between soul, mind and heart street
-in the middle of nowhere
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Kasia Fedyk
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Brandon Rhodes 12 July 2012

Love the description! Awesome

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2012

Wonderful poem, very inspired.

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Neela Nath Das 07 July 2012

You are the queen of description. This poem is full of meticulous details. Liked much.

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Daniel David 06 July 2012

Really like this poem.... how someone holds your heart but you are unaware of it happening.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 July 2012

between soul, mind and heart street -in the middle of nowhere love walked by.............................................by the gleams of art of love heart holds to belong on path of glimmering luminescence soul longs to behold....wonderful write by the imagery and metaphor, reader awes looking to hidden art of beauty,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Heather Wilson 06 July 2012

Oh, that is just beautiful, , her dress like one huge snowflake, I love it. wonderful poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 July 2012

The expression of color tones out of gem stones is superbly painted here! I liked this poem! !

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Ralph The Elf 05 July 2012

wow...this is beautiful.im in love...

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