The Perfect Man Comments

Yea, well that's the perfect man alright. Maybe that's why they're hard for women to find. They're always at sea. Those who know me, know I'm a romantic and believe in perfect things in love. I'm a more harsh critic on poetry however. I always judge pieces like this as prose, not poetry. But I've never believed prose is a bad thing. This is not a bad thing either. It's just not a great thing. When the sentiment is greater than the words the gap between what is, and what could have been, is greater. I would give it a six because there is little creativity here. In the end, that's what gives Art it's distinguishing values. It was, however, worth reading. I'm glad I stopped by, I may come again. Greenwolfe 1962