The Perfect Love Comments

You have used your narrative technique too good with an open ending. Keep up

My dear poet, your poe is so unique, so beautiful. Thanks for sharing. 10++++

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction.

Your unique beauty! Thanks for sharing.

Expressed beautifully... written drenched in love and longing. Only a true poet can do this.

Extraordinarily written with a nice rhythm. GREAT!

Extraordinarily written with a fine rhythm, Great! !

I dreamt in the night, embracing yout heart, crying indeed for nothing could be the fragrance of your soul pierced in to my bones Like the freezing wind blown at snow capped mountains like those picturing in a movie, liked this stanza very much. very poetic and full of desire and passion and a great imagination. day dream as you say. thank you. tony

Leaving me all alone, in the darkness Of the mighty universe, having No one to share the life In all tomorrows of the past, That's how life sums up, cold, quite and lonely with only the moon accompanying in the darkest of dark nights.

Beautiful and so sweet, it makes one sigh reading this remarkable piece of poetry 10+ rate