Tuesday, July 27, 2010

The Perfect Kill (Q Style) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like the final scream of a banzai warrior
Dedicated to the cause
Focused
She zeroed in
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Marcus McKinley
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Troy Ulysses Davis 28 September 2013

Excellent piece. I love the pace and the metapors. A strong finish. We never hear enough about the downsides of love.

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Beach Girl 09 September 2013

It hurt a little to read this poem. Your words are so expressive I could almost feel the pain myself. I enjoyed the Q style.

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