The Perfect Family Comments
On portraying, a perfect family,
Every parent’s, precious goal,
Gaining neighbor’s, total extol,
Displaying in time, great control,
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Complicated and ambiguous it may appear, no doubt. But internal leadership and affectionate control by parents (especially the father) could transform a family into a perfect family. Thanks for this masterpiece.
It is quite idealistic to aspire to be a perfect family, but possible, as your well written poem shows. I like the quatrains and rhymes.
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7/30/2025 12:21:28 PM # 1.0.0
A perfect family, may be complicated and non-achievable/ Yet, best to aim it. When one throws a stone aiming at moon, it may hit the tallest tree in the vicinity, but not the bush at one's feet. Great thinking. X