Saturday, April 2, 2005

The Perfect Crime Comments

Rating: 5.0

They said I was loyal
all those years
that I must’ve shed
a river of tears
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Brenda Finch
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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 April 2005

Interesting poem; great flow. Thanks for sharing!

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Scarborough Gypsy 03 April 2005

Marvelous Brenda, though I had expected more of a twist at the end. Perhaps the title gave it away a bit? ? ? Otherwise it was great. Good rhyme and rythm.

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