The people of the vent
Are rude and never clear,
Their voices mask confusion
Although the coast looks clear.
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The lovely SG said this is one of your best. And she is a smart woman, and very right. We always criticize ourselves, on top of the criticism we receive from others. It is human habit, but I suppose it keeps us grounded. Lovely write!
wow..this was really quite unique and thought provoking..i think i get u. Fantastic write..putting it on my favourites. Thanks for sharing..really enjoyed. -SG x
This is an extraordinary poem, the flow of this poem was phenomenal! Truly captivating..........