The Pen Is Searching, Rhyming, Internal Or End-Rhyming.... Comments
The pen is searching,
rhyming, internal or end-rhyming....
i am but a human being, no magician nor politician,
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Yes, the pen is always searching....searching for great themes to write, searching that rhyme that tingle the mind.....searching that magic words, beautiful words that will make poetry immortal. Yet, with God, search for perpetual love is over for His love is great , eternal and encompassing. Beautifully crafted write.
3) The paper has run out of space so quickest always, here on Poem Hunter. Yes, I have dried my tears now, but am still touched very much by your presence of those loveliest words. I regard them loveliest, that I tell you time and again. Thank you for your loveliest strong words to give me great support. Dear Mrs. Juan Austin, I love you as you are, a great poetess, supporting ardently others
4) I thank the Lord that He gave me you. Please, have no fear of my words, I tell you that because I know about that and since I believe in Him, so I tell you in my honest way, of course no fear nor problems, you are truly beautiful in heart and soul and as I oftentimes told you you have a beautiful mind. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Your support
5) do mean very much to me and it makes me truly happy. I wish you enjoy your day, see the beauty around you, dear great poetess.
What a unique thought that the great Poetess had conveyed in this marvelous poem. How amazing to read different thoughts from one mind and end up with with glorifying the Lord Almighty. Sylvia's pen always find that flow where she can convey the great message of God and that is the Love of God to humanity.
Your fabulous response, your precious comment and your valuable compliments make my tears flow fluently because of the great joy and being touched very much having read your words that is like a loveliest prose poem itself. You are such an ardent Mrs. Juan Austin, through and through a passionate poetess, constantly greatest in mind and in being. Your loving and caring words say it
2) all here right now in my dutch morning. Your responses are one by one prose-poems themselves. Written with such a caring, with such love for the written words, you know me, I can go on and on like I have nothing to do anymore only responding to your loveliest responses here. I always get the most beautiful and caring comments and compliments, they're very special to me.
The pen is searching, rhyming, internal or end-rhyming.... i am but a human being, no magician nor politician, now I am submitting, the song that I daily sing, This is the real experience of every poet in day to day life. wonderful. tony
Thank you so much Dr. Tony for your marvelous response so honestly. If you haven't written this response here, I was thinking entirely in a different way.Exchanging views or thioughts is the best option. Thank you so much, best regards from Sylvia FC
God is our father. He is our grandfather. He is our great grandfather also. We love him very much. We believe in him. No evil person can break our trust. God beautifies our path of success. God motivates mind and God allows us to live happily and peacefully. This poem is interestingly and nicely penned. This deserves full point and I have rated 10 point for this. Thank you very much for sharing this outstanding work!
This Hindi poem is a response to my Dutch poem titled, " De Pen Zoekt, Rijmend, Intern of Eind Rijmend, " as a response in poem, in praise of poetess and God. Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir is the poet of this excellent and magnificent response based upon great poetic expression The poem is in Free Verse.
This response upon your great amazing Response in the Hindi Language upon my Poem in Dutch titled: " De Pen Zoekt, Rijmend, Intern of Eind Rijmend, " God’s Blessings in Abundance for thee, Master Poet Kumarmani, Flattered, honoured and humbled, humbly me, Sylvie
By God's grace countless we count countless aces and infinite time we feel his wonder. His grace has fallen on us. Definitely in the poetic world our poems will be immortal. Volcano eruption and corruption we cannot stop as we cannot control others and these things are so sad for society. But we have kept our minds in God and we feel his pure presence. Our only powerful God protects us. Who believes him or not it does not matter. But we strongly believe him.
No evil person can break our trust. God beautifies our path to success. God inspires the mind and soul. God allows us to live in happiness and peace. We are His children
How beautiful it is to experience God from both sides. To realize that this is going on. And on, and on while God is still giving us a helping hand. This is the result of God betwixt us. I am grateful endlessly, Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir.
You are neither magician not a politician. Being a common person and uncommon poetess you feel God's grace at each step of your life and you reflect this in your every writing. Your daily song is very sweet and you are submitting this. We clearly see deep devotion and eagerness for this submission. Your pen is a powerful pen and this truly reflects your inner state. This pen is very sweet and this rhymes as you rhyme. This is very interesting and beautifully presents thought.
I cite partly your loveliest poem in Hindi, here in English: Indeed, absolutely true: God is our Father. He is our Grandfather. He is also our Great Grandfather. We love him unconditionally. We believe in him.
I am truly overwhelmed and forced myself to “read that in Hindi”. The translation, of course. Then I write as my response in the English language, we mutually understand. I am deepest honoured, dear Sir.
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7/21/2025 10:08:45 AM # 1.0.0
This is fantastic. Love to read.anjandev roy.
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