Tuesday, July 7, 2009

The Pen Goes Dry Comments

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How I wish I could write
That life's a bed of roses,
It's not one hell of a fight
With ugly wounds and bloody noses,
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
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Ency Bearis 07 July 2009

a good introspection....well presented...written well nice to read...splendid poem...10

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Sidi Mahtrow 07 July 2009

The ink like a spring flood Sweeps all before it as thoughts are understood. And words put to paper, like stones Keep the water in the course where it belongs. Until phrases clear Become a river of thoughts to share. Then the emerging prose or poetry Burst forth from the estuary into the sea. Challenging you to write some more! s

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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