Wednesday, August 21, 2019

The Pen.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

the weather is very happy today,
I'm just not sunny enough
to be able to
enjoy,
...
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2019

This is great to hear that heavy weather has motivated you and you have perceived this as sunny enough to enjoy life. Your thought with great beauty has motivated your pen to pen nice poem on paper. Laughing of sun at early stage has made you laugh in amazing way. You are crazy about waterfalls. You have expressed your greatest love towards your pen as a tribute and penned this excellent poem....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 August 2019

Another lovely poem, Sylvia. So refreshing like rain falling on our rooftops creating a lovely song. Yes, hard rain rhythm is like that of a waterfall. A heartwarming write beautifully crafted and well conveyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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