Sunday, May 16, 2021

The Pelican And The Last Cigarette Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pelican slips a fish down its throat
Then, flies away
As the storm clouds rolls in,
I took a drag of my last cigarette
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 17 May 2021

A masterful creation. Well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 May 2021

But today I don't care.... fantastic!

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Lyn Paul 17 May 2021

A feeling I have never felt. Explains well your feelings. Relieved there was no cigarette.

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Lyn Paul 17 May 2021

"But.today, I don't care"

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 May 2021

Living in a free country, we may do anthing we want except murdering and killing other popele, no, dear LeeAnn? A very impressive read.5 Stars for you!

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M Asim Nehal 16 May 2021

Profound! ! ! ! to sum up your poem a single act is enough.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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