Wednesday, March 8, 2023

The Pedestrian Comments

Rating: 5.0

There perhaps is a time for
the pedestrian plodding of prose
the great bard once observed
when the mission to be
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M.J. Lemon
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This profound poem is now ranked #44 among the Best Poets of Members. Congratulations.

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Pallavi Tripathi 15 March 2023

Loved it! Agree with Susan brilliant, intelligence pouring out

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2023

Thank you so much, Pallavi.

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Susan Williams 15 March 2023

a blast of well-needed truth--so intelligently and wisely written--- 5 million learned stars applauding

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2023

Thank you for reading, Susan.

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3) "to be or not to be" is the perpetual dilemma of human existence, which the bard made immortal..

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2) the great bard has repeatedly spoken about this debasement in the ethics of the society… when Brutus accuses Cassius of "itching palm.." and many other instances

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2023

Absolutely agree...it is remarkable (oerhaos?) how often we return to those debased ethics. No doubt such practices preceded the Bard, and no doubt they will happen again and again many centuries from now. Thanks so much for reading.

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Profound write. "…saw greed in his deed….recognised there was poison in his passion" something we find around us in every walk of life… these lines sum up the mood of the poem…

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 09 March 2023

Great work, Lemon. Salute you

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M.J. Lemon 13 March 2023

Many thanks, Kesav. Thank you for reading.

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M. Asim Nehal 09 March 2023

Very well written poem friend M.J, I agree with the comments by another friend Richard.

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M.J. Lemon 13 March 2023

So much appreciated, Asim. Thank you for reading.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2023

I totally agree with my friend Richard. A beautiful poem

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M.J. Lemon 13 March 2023

Dillip, thank you so very much for reading.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 March 2023

2) I hope that he returns...otherwise, I'll be dreaming about this process all night long. And what a dream that would make! Kudos, my good friend!

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M.J. Lemon 13 March 2023

Richard, you absolutely made my day. Thank you so much, my friend.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 March 2023

Shakespeare, Joyce and Cohen would all be proud! As I read it a couple of times, mystery poet was coming to mind. And then he faded into the recesses of my mind.

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