Saturday, October 11, 2014

The Pearl Comments

Rating: 4.8

The pearl
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Sometimes cramp
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

Stunning lines, with the wonderment of childbirth beautifully expressed in such a creative way!

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Beautiful imagery of pearl portrayed as angel. Loved the way you captured each lines.

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

retreating amid griefs and pains....................behind every beautiful creation there restrain some pain....nice

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Valsa George 12 October 2014

I didn't get it.... Is it a mother giving birth to a baby which is sweet as an angel as the lashing waves leave on the shore a pearl oyster? Great imagery!

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Mohammad Skati 11 October 2014

Very pretty imagery and nice pictures. I loved it.

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