Tuesday, October 18, 2011

The Peace You Bring Me Comments

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You remind me of peace the whisper of the trees, how the words float off the page in the love letters i send.
You remind me of peace what everyone hopes and fights for.
Once i hold you in my possession i always have to have more.
You remind me of peace the tenderness of that of a newborn childs touch.
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Tsbiyah Bat Yah
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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018

Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 February 2016

You remind me of peace the tenderness of that of a newborn childs touch. How your love surrounds me like a soft comfortable blanket that your arms i long to be so much.. love and peace go together in your love experience. this is so wonderful an experience. thank u for this poem. tony

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