Saturday, November 21, 2020

The Pawns Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pawns I have created
Breathed life into
Just for fun
To play with
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Yehualashet Teshome
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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2020

The poem deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2020

'Delusion in amnesia' - the last line aptlty fits into the poem and concludes it quite poetically.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 November 2020

Delusion in amnesia, thanks

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