Friday, May 9, 2014

The Pause...~ Comments

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Never have i known a day so bleak
Nor one filled with forlorn and woes
Filled to overflow with unending sorrows
As this one branded deep to the marrow by my foes;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 15 May 2014

Colleen, thank you for taking the time to read this; Yes, having to live this way is a nightmare no one should ever go through. Hard to believe that these things actually do go on but they do. My wish that NO ONE else ever has to go through anything like this.Oh, the levels you go through to make your home secure...expensive-and our homes are supposed to be our castles...i often wonder if the shoe was on the other foot how they would feel! Enough about my mess.Just wanted to say that i love your poetry and plan on reading more. Again, thank you!

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Colleen Courtney 09 May 2014

Interesting write. No one should have to live their life in such fear. A well written piece.

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