The rhythmic patter
Of rain on the metal roof
Comforts the spirit.
Its tinkling is an echo
Of my lonely, lonely heart.
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Quite true... The rain is a comforting/familiar like feeling, when the heart is feeling blue! ..
Beautifully written! Excellently filled with deep emotion and imagery! Thank you for sharing : )
A highly relatable experience expressed so vividly in this poem! Thank you for sharing!
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I would like to translate this poem
Deeply heart moving! .. And so beautifully expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++