The Patter Of Rain - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Patter Of Rain - Tanka

Rating: 5.0

The rhythmic patter
Of rain on the metal roof
Comforts the spirit.
Its tinkling is an echo
Of my lonely, lonely heart.

Copyright 2025, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2025

Deeply heart moving! .. And so beautifully expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2025

Quite true... The rain is a comforting/familiar like feeling, when the heart is feeling blue! ..

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 July 2025

So lovely! Thanks for sharing x

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Isadora Quagmire 06 July 2025

Beautifully written! Excellently filled with deep emotion and imagery! Thank you for sharing : )

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Timber Koleden 06 July 2025

A highly relatable experience expressed so vividly in this poem! Thank you for sharing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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