Wednesday, July 15, 2020

The Patio Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit and sip my cold iced tea;
And watch the ships go out to sea.
On the patio blooms crowd me,
While I'm lost in sweet memory.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2020

A wonderlful remembrance of yesteryears. Great memories leave indelible marks in our minds. A marvelous poem with compelling imagery and great rhyme.

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Ravi Kopra 15 July 2020

1st stanza in Hindi/Urdu: baith jaati hoon main patio main dheeray dheeray cHotay Choty ghoont peeti hoon main thandi meethi chaaey k, doob jaati hoon main khushi ki yaadon main phool aa jhoomtay hain hawaa main patio main.

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