Wednesday, October 2, 2013

The Patient Spider Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder what he does
Between catches and kills
Waiting, patiently waiting
On that ornate web- his design
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krishnakumar chandrasekar nair
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I especially love the opening question, the frame of the first and last three lines of this poem, which wonderfully sets up and closes the thoughts between.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 April 2015

Your ability to weave poems out of such very ordinary sights is amazing. Enjoyed this one.

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2013

patience pays off. he will catch the spider just a matter of time. good write

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Abhishek Mishra 02 October 2013

An enjoyful write sir and good observation too...loved it: -)

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krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Thiruvalla, Kerala
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