Wednesday, April 30, 2014

The Patient Gardener Comments

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I stand in a garden of pretty things, all of which have bloomed
Though I wish to hear the sounds of Spring, I fear I’m out of tune
I fold in on myself one layer after another and then
Develop some thorns just in case one day I should need them
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Argentine Tango
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Sarojkanta Dash 22 June 2014

building up a defense and yet realizing the inadequacy of it- brilliant!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 June 2014

Wow superb how u draw the analogy btw a garden and love. An engaging poem. So nice to read u again.

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Hannah Kelly 05 May 2014

This is a gorgeous poem - I love the imagery, and the relationship with the gardener.

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