The Path That We Took Comments
A narrow path it was,
Gravel strewn,
Lay quietly without any passer by.
A loose chain was hanging
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A stunning write about tranquillity, serenity and beauty of a garden and the memories that linger lovingly!
@Hazel Durham, Thanks for this generous comment. I am verry much inspired by your high appraisal of the poem.
One of your most lovely poems! Seeing the picture, it is evident that every minute detail of the entrance of that illustrious garden with its quiet ambiance is well imprinted in your memory. I am sure you enjoyed your stroll through the garden without being jostled by the crowd. Every detail matches with the picture. A sure 10
Thanks for your attention to my poem, Valsa. You too have observed very minutely the picture and the poem. Your high praise and generous rating leaves me much inspired.
On a wooden culvert! Time was running out. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you dear poet EKL, for your illustrative words to appreciate my poem. Much inspired.
Garden the natural garden the narrow path between the green trees queue the green vista and the wanderer natural feelings is activated there gracefully and the felt heart smells the gratefulness of nature or the creator of it yeah really fantastically presented here the poetic feelings; I enjoyed greatly 10+
@Mahtab Bangalee, Thank you for visiting my page and leaving an appreciative comment. Much inspired by your generous rating.
A poem of remembrance and soft loving delicate beauty, In slow motion we see its poetic visions go by. So beautifully described, that even time could not make them die. A fantastically moving, elegantly poetic and unforgettable presentation. Worthy of very deep, admiration.
'In slow motion we see its poetic visions go by.' - Thank you Sandra, for appreciating my poem with these kind and thoughtful words. I am much inspired by the other appreciative lines too that follow this quote.
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A prominent memory captivating nature and sharing Melbourne, Australia with the world. Thank You Khairul.
Yes, it was a great pleasure to share this beauty of Melbourne, Australia with the world. Thank you, @Lyn Paul, for visiting my page and leaving a kind, appreciative comment.