Wednesday, March 25, 2009

The Path Of My Life Comments

Rating: 4.9

In my stream of consciouness,
the stumbles deliver poems.
The trees of reality cast their shades often
over the terrains of my life,
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Putholi Arumugham T
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Aparna Sinha 27 July 2009

I read it alomost all time I visit your profile- Very Nice one, I like poems with such endings! !

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a lovely write...connected nature to everthing....good

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Christopher Montalvo 16 May 2009

This poem is beautiful! I love the use of the nature, and how it relates to the ups and downs in life.

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Absent Wryta 20 April 2009

Expresses fully in touch feelings quite deeply and beautifully.

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Libbie Jones 13 April 2009

I had read this earlier. I loved it.. its amazing how people, like yourself can speak so poetically.. Me on the other hand, has a hard time doing so.. I write how i feel.. Here in the United States its hard to find people who can speak or write poems in an Old English way... Congrats on the poem.. Olivia Jones

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Ency Bearis 13 April 2009

the context is consequential to awareness of self...well implied write...

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Wojja Fink 12 April 2009

the waterfall pours into stillness and the stillness is unmoved...............beautiful observations...John

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Charlotte Andreski 11 April 2009

I feel this poem is the equivalent to a parallel of my life. The poetry flows as life does, meeting rapids, tides, and water, smooth as a millpond.. Very well written, so deep and honest.

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 April 2009

Well expressed the feel. Good.

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Shemaine English 01 April 2009

Another Brilliant poem! I love the emotion of it and the way it makes me think. Once again I'm jealous. (smile) You write with such depth. Very good work.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 March 2009

I think your poem is great. I'm sorry I'm not qualified to give advice.

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Christina Phan 28 March 2009

i luv it overall ur peoms was all amazing not to wrry keep it up 10+

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