Friday, October 7, 2016

The Path Of Hatred Comments

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I was full of hatred,
Because my goodness with time had faded
But the Almighty bestowed me with an angel.
Her smile and aura had stirred everyone.
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Chandini Jaswal
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Michael Walker 23 January 2020

It is never too late to repent, I like to think. The divine spirit gives her a harsh sentence, however.

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Chandini Jaswal 12 March 2020

Perhaps the speaker thinks of repentance as a punishment.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Chandini. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chandini Jaswal 11 July 2018

Thank you Sir! Apologies for the late reply.

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