The Path Of Forgiveness Comments

Mary, a deeply conflicting piece that exhudes anxiety and mixed emotions. Very powerful and well done! Brian

This is great, Mary. Meter, content, really well written. Best H

You can never go back Mary, but forgiveness is something we all to strive to achieve, not an easy task. Sincerely Ernestine

I think you're doing a good job at showing some honest intense feeling, thanks for sharing.

Mary...The last line, 'this feels very wrong' is very powerful and it fits the end of the poem beautifully. You are really reaching for the pain and touching it. Good poem.