Tuesday, April 17, 2007

The Path Knew Before The Footstep Comments

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The path knew before the footstep;
even before the ghost of a shape
passed above the stones and mud.
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Stug Jordan
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Aldo Kraas 17 April 2007

This poem is very good I must say

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Scarlett Treat 17 April 2007

Awareness... animal instinct.....wonderful writing, suspensful? This is a really good writing...The gate shutting before the had reaches. Just awesome!

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Stug Jordan

Stug Jordan

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