The Path Home Comments
The narrow path I wander down, always leads to home,
The clouds above are building up and yet onwards I roam,
The air is thick and heavy as the rain drops start to fall,
How well the storm clouds fit my mood, at one with natures call.
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Ups and downs may come and go but always walk this way Along the stony path that always brings you home each day. a beautiful inference drawn through an equally beautiful song of life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Hi Sarah, Another beautiful poem from the inimitable pen of Sarah, on love, home and nostalgia. On the day you walked into my life, Some things became clear Ups and downs may come and go, but walk always this way- the path of love is the path leading home. The path home is narrow and stony, but it is where 'water is pure and clear', 'raindrops warm my skin', 'lightning strikes you soothe', and takes me to 'your goodness'. home is where the sunshine starts. Exquisite, pleasant images. Enjoyed reading. It is just dawn in India now and your poem made may day. Congrats and thank YOU!
Thank you so much Unnikrishnan, I'm truly flattered by your kind words
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7/25/2025 9:07:48 AM # 1.0.0
Nice rhymes and great sentiments. I really like it. Well done.
Thank you Kim