Saturday, January 9, 2010

The Path Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk the path, the path of life
A path that everyone walks
It has it's ups and down, its twist and turns
Sometimes you see miles ahead
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Joshua Wyatt
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Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

I walk the path, the path of life A path that everyone walks everyone walks their own path and ends somewhere...all parallel therefore unknown to each other.Superb flow of words here.Talent outbirsts with emotions.

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Ricardo Flores 09 January 2010

Touching in several ways. sympathetic overall i would say. Great poem.

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