Tuesday, May 26, 2009

The Path Comments

Rating: 5.0

This sinless mind is the flower matured from a burly thick root
With just one shade of colour, standing as one to prove
That this path that's risen is richer… this path is deeper,
This path that has blossomed is brighter…and this path is stronger
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Sara Tehrani
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Heed the Lord says, this time the answer is with you..... you will have all the answers from his words.... beautifully worded poem.. so nice.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

A marvelous poem with the path. Wonderfully penned!

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Rachel Brewer 27 May 2009

hi, first i would like to thank you for taking an interest in my poems, i appreciate your thoughts. second, i really like this poem! it's full of wonderful imagery and the story told is beautiful throughout. you say your not a poet, you are! well done, i hope you write more because i would love to read them. xxxx

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