Friday, September 11, 2009

' The Pasta Pot Comments

Rating: 2.9

Once there was a man who thought
Adept at cooking he was not,
Upon a dish of Bolognese
He ladled sauce that won him praise
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Linda Ori
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T McH 10 October 2009

Your talent, grace and humour never fail to make me smile. t x

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David Harris 25 September 2009

Linda, A lovely example of your wonderful poetry, easy readable, nice rhythm and always enjoyable. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David

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Marieta Maglas 24 September 2009

Wonderful narrative poem, very well written, nice rhymes, Linda! Thank you for sharing.............10+++++++++

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His talent lied in how he stirred - That wooden ladle fairly purred, :) That was an apt show of your writing prowess, I'm confused about being awed or amused

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Ramesh T A 11 September 2009

Nice pasta pot you have cooked by your poem!

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