Thursday, May 21, 2009

The Past, The Present Comments

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I see her,
that girl I used to be.
When I had a family, friends,
people who cared.
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Alice Winters
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Bright Rose 21 May 2009

it's lovely, I do have one thing to correct change 'I used to smile, and laugh, and dance, and play' into 'I used to smile, laugh, dance and play' that's it, lovely poem by the way, very evocative

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