it's lovely, I do have one thing to correct
change 'I used to smile, and laugh, and dance, and play' into 'I used to smile, laugh, dance and play'
that's it, lovely poem by the way, very evocative
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it's lovely, I do have one thing to correct change 'I used to smile, and laugh, and dance, and play' into 'I used to smile, laugh, dance and play' that's it, lovely poem by the way, very evocative