Wednesday, November 27, 2013

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Amidst the shadows of some trees
At the shoreline of a calm sea
There she stands still, days and nights
In thirst of his voice, in quest of his sight
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The fallen leaves of Mira
sea
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 December 2013

i agree with Dave.. simple, short but beautiful like every words show their own emotions very good and thanks for sharing

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Dave Walker 28 November 2013

A short but very beautiful poem, a fantastic flow. She will see all she wants to see one day.

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