Saturday, October 10, 2009

The Passion Of Creation Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am smoking the herb outside drinking wine.
Standing i feel the breeze that's when my talent shine.
I reach for my put down and start to rhyme.
Even if i am mad at the world i start to feel just fine.
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Pink Butterfly ... 10 October 2009

This one is really lovely! ! ! Wonderful indeed! God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-

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Quin Faas 10 October 2009

Anthony, you've accomplished making this rhythmic..but you detail very well your gift of writing.

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