The Passing Out Song Comments

Nothing lasts forever. Good things must come to an end. Remembering the days of being with comrades and running together must have been very rewarding. Thanks for the memories. Enjoyed your write. Please read my poem Salute to Soldiers.

A nice write for all the lads.this is one special memory you will always look back on.

Very nice poem of your old memories.

nice 1..its natural that each and every person miss their old days a lot...this poem reminded some of my old memo.... :)

this is my favorite poem of yours, this is great

I liked this because I could identify and relate; not everyone, as you know, has that commonality. It may be that there's room for expansion to the point of doubling content.