Sunday, May 7, 2017

The Passing Of Hours Comments

Rating: 4.5

At daybreak I awoke alone
With a sadness I could not quell,
Without a love to call my own,
And now, morning's waving farewell
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 02 September 2023

Apparently, Lora, I had not read this poem till today. And WHO did I find lurking? Why, Brian Johnston, ...of course! ;) Five stars for another brick in your staircase of loneliness.: ( bri

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Bipasha D 01 September 2020

Beautifully crafted with rhymes, it flows so well. 

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Brian Johnston 23 May 2017

A Proposal OK, OK, I love you already! OK, OK, seems each verse is a kiss OK, OK, you hear that train whistle? Coming or going, I'm heat seeking missile? How long do we have to keep meeting like this? From Every poet in the world! (And me too!)

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Bri Edwards 02 September 2023

BRIAN johnston, What a loverboy YOU are! ! ! : ) bri edwards aka brian whitaker

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2017

Seems marital longing. Thanks

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Denis Mair 07 May 2017

This (non-kiss that finds its way to no-lips is beautiful nonetheless, because it testifies to the circuit that Mother Nature tries to complete through each of us.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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