The Passing Of Grandfather Comments

This is awesome. I can tell it really happened almost exactly like this. When my mother was dying, she kept looking up at the corner of her room, and her lips would move like she was carrying on a conversation. I've no doubt it was her 'car pool' come to welcome her home. (smile)

I agree with everyone, this is a very touching piece. Very well done, Sandra.

A poem that touches the heart with emotion so much...thank you...Fi 10+++

oh, touched my heart... i want to cry with their story beautifully crafted into this piece.. really touching... very great.... 10+++

this is sad.. I feel the sorrow and pain..

a very touching poem...the last two lines were excellent