Wednesday, May 6, 2015

The Passing Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a cold day in May
Filled with fugitives of another time
Offering up history to repeat itself
I can still hear the sorrowful music
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 12 March 2016

Thank you Amitava for your gracious words. You are appreciated.

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Theodora Onken 12 March 2016

Thank you S. Kamoonpuri for taking the time to read my words. You are so appreciated!

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Amitava Sur 26 September 2015

A very poignant memoir of the beloved ones who reappear with the recycling of years after years. Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing You may read one of my poems I miss you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 June 2015

Awesome and poetic poignancy at sad memories. U wrote it in an interesting way n style beginning as freeverse then goes into quatrain rhyme. Yeah I do sth like that too. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too titled pop goes....

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