Friday, April 27, 2018

The Passerby Named Strawberry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Memories from a dark cell
Cast a glassy shadow on the slim road,
Baby strawberries pop up with heads and grins.
Transforming into papercuts in the wind.
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Wang Qian
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, . You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Misha Allport 13 June 2018

Dearest Qiang, As is your custom, it is elegant, refined & very subtle, yet different..The yearnijng for something natural and simple, and yet, dynamic(''transforming, '' ''blossoms'') indicating change. The change is dualistic, , and ait complementary and contradictory at the same time.It touches on the evolution of your womanhood that is being shaped by the times, locale and culture in which you live, work and play.It is representative of a type of cross roads in your life;

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