Monday, June 12, 2017

The Passenger In The Twilight Comments

Rating: 4.3

Deep darkish clouds have
covered the sky
To bid the sinking Sun
a fitting goodbye.
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Anjan K
COMMENTS
Rini Shibu 18 June 2017

Wow awesome...looking forward to his upcoming journey to the unknown..great

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 June 2017

A very fine piece of poetry. I almost recall my own style of composing poems. A tender imagery, a clean run and a meaningful ending...yes this is very much my preferred style. Well... I wish to read more.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 June 2017

A good start with a powerful natural poem. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 June 2017

To bid the sinking Sun a fitting goodbye. ever flowing river with great awe & delight, twilight and its beauty. you have pictured it very well very poetically. Very nice poem. Thank u very much dear

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