The Party Comments

Wonderful had me contemplating Roden's the thinker, which is how came across. The one who observes soaks and considers the deeper layers within. Consumerism in scent the ones who are always going to try too hard In the corner bathed in insecurity Crouches failure, Lacking guile, to fake the smile That brings such rich reward. For him, tonight, no body to entwine. Loved this section particularly lacking guile to fake smile. Bravo on he lonesome but real. I watch come dine with me and am hypnotised by the unusually high pitched greetings some competitors let out at the doors usually as I see it compensating for coating the conpetitors off the night before. I am now totally suspicious if I am greeted by a high screechy 'hello! ' I sound awful I know but it's just in my world :) Tubman for sharing a grand piece karen

Great piece.very interesting.

Great piece.very interesting.

Time is most important. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.