Sunday, November 6, 2005

The Party Comments

Rating: 3.5

A sea of faces wait expectantly,
Watching, smiling, caring,
Enveloping you with loving gazes,
As you open a much adored gift.
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Vanessa Brown
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Charles Chaim Wax 06 November 2005

bliss what an emotion so few can even dream of it yet you have expressed vividly how to get it what it feels like and the knowledge nothing lasts but still not sad a great poem

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